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		<title>By: This Week in Favs… &#124; Melinda S. Collins</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[This Week in Favs… &#124; Melinda S. Collins]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Apr 2013 00:42:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] All Characters Deserve to be in the Story by Mooderino on Moody Writing   5 Common Writing Blunders that Can Annoy or Bore Our Readers by Kristen Lamb   Tools for Writers Part 1 by Annie Neugebauer   Flip the Script: Use Adverbs [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] All Characters Deserve to be in the Story by Mooderino on Moody Writing   5 Common Writing Blunders that Can Annoy or Bore Our Readers by Kristen Lamb   Tools for Writers Part 1 by Annie Neugebauer   Flip the Script: Use Adverbs [...]</p>
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		<title>By: S. E. Myers</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[S. E. Myers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Aug 2012 15:41:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you for this!  I]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for this!  I</p>
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		<title>By: J. Lenni Dorner</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[J. Lenni Dorner]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Aug 2012 06:06:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This was a very informative post. I feel that I have not read these tips before. Thank you for sharing!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was a very informative post. I feel that I have not read these tips before. Thank you for sharing!</p>
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		<title>By: Sunday Reads: 29 July 2012 - The Fictorian Era</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jul 2012 09:03:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Kristen Lamb has 5 Common Writing Blunders That Can Annoy or Bore Our Readers. [...]]]></description>
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		<title>By: First Impressions: The First Page &#171; Home of the Young Writer</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2012 19:40:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] 5 Common Writing Blunders that Can Annoy or Bore Our Readers, by Kristen Lamb [...]]]></description>
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		<title>By: Matthew Trull</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Matthew Trull]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jul 2012 02:29:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good information Kristen.  Info dump is not where I am faltering, rather I have 7 main characters in my story.  And as you say, I&#039;ve got to think more about the reader remembering who they are.  Thanks for the insight.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good information Kristen.  Info dump is not where I am faltering, rather I have 7 main characters in my story.  And as you say, I&#8217;ve got to think more about the reader remembering who they are.  Thanks for the insight.</p>
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		<title>By: A Slow, Smooth ROW:ROWnd 3, Update #5 &#171; shanjeniah</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[A Slow, Smooth ROW:ROWnd 3, Update #5 &#171; shanjeniah]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jul 2012 03:44:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Danielle Bannister</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Danielle Bannister]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Jul 2012 11:40:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[What are you thoughts on naming characters with the same first letter.  Like two MC that start with J for instance. That drives me nuts!  My brain can&#039;t handle the similarity, just change the names to they aren&#039;t so similar, yet I see it all the time!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What are you thoughts on naming characters with the same first letter.  Like two MC that start with J for instance. That drives me nuts!  My brain can&#8217;t handle the similarity, just change the names to they aren&#8217;t so similar, yet I see it all the time!</p>
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		<title>By: Brenda Hasse</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Brenda Hasse]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jul 2012 12:07:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great advise!!! I have reposted for others to see. Yes, weaving information into your story instead of dumping it all at once is a must. Dumping information gives the reader too many details at one time and bogs down the flow of the story. As a writer, I try and choose character names that are easy to read. I find, as a reader, I skip over character names that are difficult to read and force me to slow the tempo of my reading. The Emotion Thesaurus sounds like a handy resource for those times my mind becomes redundant. Thanks for posting this information!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great advise!!! I have reposted for others to see. Yes, weaving information into your story instead of dumping it all at once is a must. Dumping information gives the reader too many details at one time and bogs down the flow of the story. As a writer, I try and choose character names that are easy to read. I find, as a reader, I skip over character names that are difficult to read and force me to slow the tempo of my reading. The Emotion Thesaurus sounds like a handy resource for those times my mind becomes redundant. Thanks for posting this information!</p>
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		<title>By: Mind Sieve 7/16/12 &#171; Gloria Oliver</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mind Sieve 7/16/12 &#171; Gloria Oliver]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Jul 2012 11:26:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] 5 Common Writing Blunders That Can Annoy or Bore Your Readers from Kristen Lamb. [...]]]></description>
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