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		<title>By: Curbing My Voyeuristic Tendencies &#171; Alica McKenna Johnson</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Curbing My Voyeuristic Tendencies &#171; Alica McKenna Johnson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jan 2013 12:59:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] sometimes I still dig my heels into and refuse to give up my little darlings. Which according to Kristen Lamb I need to recognize and [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] sometimes I still dig my heels into and refuse to give up my little darlings. Which according to Kristen Lamb I need to recognize and [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Cassie</title>
		<link>http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/little-darlings-why-they-must-die-for-real-3/#comment-55485</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cassie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Jan 2013 16:49:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You write in such a witty way, I loved reading this advice.  Plus, I completely agree with the side rant about King.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You write in such a witty way, I loved reading this advice.  Plus, I completely agree with the side rant about King.</p>
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		<title>By: Link to Kristen Lamb &#171; Anne Williams Smith ~ The Creative Corner</title>
		<link>http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/little-darlings-why-they-must-die-for-real-3/#comment-49706</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Link to Kristen Lamb &#171; Anne Williams Smith ~ The Creative Corner]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Oct 2012 14:00:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] the Love Revolution #MyWANA        « Little Darlings &amp; Why They Must Die…for REAL 10 Things No One Told Me About the Publishing Process [...]]]></description>
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		<title>By: Autumn Markus</title>
		<link>http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/little-darlings-why-they-must-die-for-real-3/#comment-49364</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Autumn Markus]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2012 23:52:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I learned that when my explanation of why the section/character/plotline my editor wants me to cut out gets too complex and I get self-righteous, she&#039;s right and I&#039;m wrong. End of story. When it really counts, I can explain simply and there&#039;s no inclination to get whiny. It was a hard lesson, and I&#039;m so glad she didn&#039;t give up on me (thanks, CJ).]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I learned that when my explanation of why the section/character/plotline my editor wants me to cut out gets too complex and I get self-righteous, she&#8217;s right and I&#8217;m wrong. End of story. When it really counts, I can explain simply and there&#8217;s no inclination to get whiny. It was a hard lesson, and I&#8217;m so glad she didn&#8217;t give up on me (thanks, CJ).</p>
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		<title>By: katmagendie</title>
		<link>http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/little-darlings-why-they-must-die-for-real-3/#comment-48062</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[katmagendie]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2012 23:10:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I rip out when I see I&#039;m trying to be &quot;clever&quot; and let the blood and guts fly . . .]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I rip out when I see I&#8217;m trying to be &#8220;clever&#8221; and let the blood and guts fly . . .</p>
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		<title>By: Writing Blog Treasures 9~15 &#124; Gene Lempp ~ Writer</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Writing Blog Treasures 9~15 &#124; Gene Lempp ~ Writer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2012 21:20:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Little Darlings and Why They MUST Die &#8211; for Real! by Kristen Lamb. [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Little Darlings and Why They MUST Die &#8211; for Real! by Kristen Lamb. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Patricia Winton</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Patricia Winton]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2012 12:20:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I bought a copy of We Are Not Alone last year at Killer Nashville. I think it&#039;s a sensible, well thought out book, and I&#039;m ashamed to say that I haven&#039;t followed through with your great suggestions.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I bought a copy of We Are Not Alone last year at Killer Nashville. I think it&#8217;s a sensible, well thought out book, and I&#8217;m ashamed to say that I haven&#8217;t followed through with your great suggestions.</p>
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		<title>By: Cordelia Dinsmore</title>
		<link>http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2012/09/10/little-darlings-why-they-must-die-for-real-3/#comment-47937</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cordelia Dinsmore]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2012 16:13:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ouch! I think you explained very well my biggest weakness - complexity. But then again, it may be the melodrama. Lots of good information here to think about and attempt to put into practice. Thank you so much.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ouch! I think you explained very well my biggest weakness &#8211; complexity. But then again, it may be the melodrama. Lots of good information here to think about and attempt to put into practice. Thank you so much.</p>
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		<title>By: Rick Marchetti</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rick Marchetti]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2012 14:39:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great information.  I would guess that most of us have this problem with our &quot;little darlings&quot;.  I&#039;ve killed off some, but I&#039;m sure there are some &quot;lurkers&quot; I haven&#039;t done in yet.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great information.  I would guess that most of us have this problem with our &#8220;little darlings&#8221;.  I&#8217;ve killed off some, but I&#8217;m sure there are some &#8220;lurkers&#8221; I haven&#8217;t done in yet.</p>
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		<title>By: Friday Favorites &#124; Katie Ganshert - wildflowers from winter</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Friday Favorites &#124; Katie Ganshert - wildflowers from winter]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2012 05:05:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] Little Darlings and Why They Must Die by Kristen Lamb  Kristen says, &#8220;Be truthful. Are your &#8216;flowers&#8217; part of a garden or covering a grave?&#8221; I love this question!  My line editor sent me an article recently called Ten Rules of Writing Fiction. We both love rule #3 by Diane Athill the best.   &#8220;You don&#8217;t always have to go so far as to murder your darlings&#8211;those turns of phrase or images of which you felt extra proud when they appeared on the page&#8211;but go back and look at them with a very beady eye. Almost always it turns out they&#8217;d be better dead. Not every little twinge of satisfaction is suspect. It&#8217;s the ones which amount to a sort of smug glee you must watch out for.&#8221;  Oh, this has been such a lesson I&#8217;ve had to learn along my writing journey! [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Little Darlings and Why They Must Die by Kristen Lamb  Kristen says, &#8220;Be truthful. Are your &#8216;flowers&#8217; part of a garden or covering a grave?&#8221; I love this question!  My line editor sent me an article recently called Ten Rules of Writing Fiction. We both love rule #3 by Diane Athill the best.   &#8220;You don&#8217;t always have to go so far as to murder your darlings&#8211;those turns of phrase or images of which you felt extra proud when they appeared on the page&#8211;but go back and look at them with a very beady eye. Almost always it turns out they&#8217;d be better dead. Not every little twinge of satisfaction is suspect. It&#8217;s the ones which amount to a sort of smug glee you must watch out for.&#8221;  Oh, this has been such a lesson I&#8217;ve had to learn along my writing journey! [...]</p>
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